Saturday, February 19, 2011

Wk 3 Project

Writing 120 words has never been so hard! I started off with a metaphor, which I thought was helpful in understanding the problem I was addressing. Other than that, I wrote what I thought needed to be in while also trying to keep it short. I came out to 127 words and then had to get creative with deleting unnecessary words. After some tinkering, I ended up with 119 words. Perfect.

Now I'm off to worry about my assignment for the next week...

1 comment:

  1. Bryan I had the same problems with trying to get my abstract down to under 120 words. I had everything I wanted to say in 128 words and had to eliminate a whole sentence that I thought would have been good in the abstract.

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